Gordo in the Creek

Posted by Bill Jennings ((Bay Area Northern Calif), United States) on 10 May 2009 in People & Portrait and Portfolio.

Gordo enjoys standing in the creek today, playing in water this afternoon - what can I say, boys will be boys!

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Dulcie from Danville, United States

Simply delicious photo. Gordo's hair, skin and features and his concentration; so precious...then the texture of the water and colors of bucket and wagon against the soft dark background. I'll say it again: Delicious!!

10 May 2009 6:08am

@Dulcie: And if you knew how precious he is - you'd double down on that delicious comment. He's a great boy - having a fun time in our creek that runs through our yard... I just regret he didn't do this on the other bank - so I'd catch his reflection: but a photographer has to live with what he sees.

Linerberry from Sumner, Christchurch, New Zealand

Ooo the concentration!!!! What a sweet and wonderful shot!

10 May 2009 6:47am

@Linerberry: Thanks Linerberry - you can imagine, I wasn't going to tell him to stop just then. Not sure why he was doing what he was doing, but as a dad/photographer: I was happy to see him doing this!

P J W Miller from Chase Terrace, United Kingdom

Bill this is a lovely image, you have framed it so well and his expression is wonderful

10 May 2009 7:13am

@P J W Miller: thanks P J W. I love the curls, and the water play in this photo. He is so intensely focused on his task at hand - glad you see that through the photo.

Mirza Ahmad from Thames Ditton, United Kingdom

Nice, refreshing capture.

10 May 2009 11:08am

@Mirza Ahmad: Yes, I think refreshing is the right word - great choice of a description. Thank you.

Marie-Hélène Ammor from Casablanca/Paris, Morocco

Great photo ! Your boy is very concentrated ,playing with water is a great oy for all children ! I like that your photo is not so neat ,it gives an atmosphere ! but the water is superb ,I love those splashes !

10 May 2009 11:59am

@Marie-Hélène Ammor: All the children enjoy the water - but Gordo is the master of getting wet. He is so adorable, especially when he is in full concentration mode. I loved the colors, and the intensity: especially under the afternoon shade of the redwoods. Thank you for your kind words on the photo.

nazanin from tehran, Iran

nice shot

10 May 2009 12:07pm

@nazanin: Nazanin, thanks,

Denise from Perry, United States

How fantastic! UNfortunatley we don't have a creek on our property or our kids would have done the same thing. So much fun! GReat shot, he is adorable.

10 May 2009 1:14pm

@Denise: We pretty much bought the house so the kids had a creek - they adore the outdoors and we truly encourage the kids to get dirty and enjoy the land. Glad you like my adorable gordo. He does stop traffic, especially the women, when we walk downtown. His curly blonde hair, and bright blue eyes will get him in trouble with the women, I am sure, someday soon.

john4jack from Corvallis, Oregon, United States

Terrific capture, Bill. A young man hard at work; very serious business!

10 May 2009 1:51pm

@john4jack: Thank you - I do believe he is pretty serious at his play, for being not even three yesterday.

bluechameleon from Vancouver, Canada

Love the look of concentration on his face :)

10 May 2009 2:03pm

@bluechameleon: I couldn't stop him for all the tea in china right then. He is very intense when he plays with water.

Barbara from Florida, United States

It could be easy to sit for hours to observe and photograph the emotions of childs playtime.
Although Gordo shows determination and focus here on what he is doing. He has both hands on that bucket, it looks like a serious task. You captured that emotion so well.
The clarity and spot on focus of the water is remarkable while keeping Gordo in focus as well. The bright colors and adorable wheelbarrel are a nice addition for a peak into a childs world.
I like to see children with a sense of adventure and creating like this. Very nice, Bill.

10 May 2009 2:33pm

@Barbara: He's a great kid that really likes working in the water. I wish Gordo was a tad more sharp (say f/3.5) - but I like how the very sharp water, and bright colors draw you again. Once again, I really appreciate your detailed read of the photo, and how you really sense the emotive draw Gordo brings to me - very happy.

Barbara from Florida, United States

Your mention and link of my "Found my Marbles" is greatly appreciated. Thank you very much, Bill.

10 May 2009 2:37pm

@Barbara: You have a truly amazing macro in your photo, glad to link it in my blog: makes me look even better!

Mariana from waterloo, Canada

This photo is gorgeous . Your boy is simple adorable. He looks so serious about his job :)) Your photo is superb ! These colors - yellow, red, and how well you caught the water is just perfect ;))

10 May 2009 2:51pm

@Mariana: well, some folks he gets that adorable hair and eyes from his dad... He's a great kid, and he loves to play in the water. thanks for the kind words on the photo. I think of Carly SImon's Let the River Run when I see Gordo in the water:

We the great and small
stand on a star
and blaze a trail of desire
through the darkening dawn

It's asking for the taking
Come run with me now
the sky is the colour of blue
you've never even seen
in the eyes of your lover

Oh, my heart is aching
We're coming to the edge
running on the water
coming through the fog
your sons and daughters

rem_la from Villiers, France

un futur jardinier !

10 May 2009 2:55pm

@rem_la: Merci. He is indeed a future gardener!

Michael from Deer Park, United States

wow. nice still. you captured the moment perfectly.

10 May 2009 4:44pm

@Michael: Thank you Michael - it's great to have a digital camera - so you can really take many photos, and find just the right moment later. Glad you liked it.

Ajay from Pune, India

I love the fine quality of this shot, Bill. Not to mention the quality of the childhood action is also superb. Reminds us of our childhood when the greatest fun was in doing things with no purpose.

10 May 2009 5:08pm

@Ajay: Thanks Ajay - I miss those days from time to time myself: unstructured play, with no purpose other than appreciation of the wonders of life. I guess that's why I like photography: never know for sure what I'll find when I leave the house with the camera.

Susan from Fort Lauderdale, FL, United States

Great catch Bill....the way you caught that water is really striking.....and I can see why you'd wanted Gordo to be a tad more in focus, but sometimes we give up small things like that for a moment of emotion.....Now, 2 comments/questions.... you mention Gordo's blonde hair & blue eyes.....well, can't see his eyes, but he sure looks like he's got brown hair to me in this shot.....Am I nuts????? and the other thing....."Radio Flyer"......I thought they only made snow sleds.....I had a Radio Flyer sled about 50 years ago!!!! Surprised that they are still in business!!!
happy mom's day to the mother of your 3 great kids!!

10 May 2009 5:27pm

@Susan: gordos hair is darkening, specially in winter with less sun to bleach his hair. Yep, we found a radio flyer wheelbarrow for kids, and Dad insisted on it's purchase (still a kid at heart). Thanks for kind words on photo be well wishes for family.

john4jack from Corvallis, Oregon, United States

Our granddaughter, the light of my life, turns 3 June 26; she is equally serious about her "work."

10 May 2009 6:08pm

@john4jack: gordo is her contemporary, turns three early July. So great at this age. I look forward to being a granddad in due time.

Miss Ruthie from Glendale California, United States

Absolutely a Wonderful Photo! The Wheelbarrow is soo cool and the Water flowing into it is Simply Fabulous! Bill...

10 May 2009 6:29pm

@Miss Ruthie: miss ruthis, you picked up on the second and third most favorite parts of the photo - only Gordo would top the water and wheelbarrow. Thanks for the great comments from you.

B. Thomas from Arlington, Texas, United States

He is really into his business, as only a little kid can be. Very cute.

10 May 2009 10:45pm

@B. Thomas: Can you imagine if we all worked this intensely as adults? He really loves playing with water, and this reminds us how important it is to enjoy what you do. Thanks for the comments, Bill

Onlymehdi from Wayne, United States

OMG, Great Great shot, I love it

11 May 2009 3:05am

@Onlymehdi: Thank you - it was a fun shot to take.

Sugata from Newark, United States

I love the look of intense concentration in his face!

11 May 2009 3:47am

@Sugata: Indeed. Gordo was very intent on his play that day!

jamesy from christchurch, New Zealand

what a beautiful portrait he is so engrossed in what he is doing fabulous

11 May 2009 7:10am

@jamesy: Thanks - its a little soft, but I liked the composition, the colors, and his intensity.

Mandy Provan from Johannesburg, South Africa

This is such a fantastic natural portrait of a little boy being just that....a little boy! One for a huge canvas on a wall Bill - FANTASTIC!! You're an inspiration

11 May 2009 7:53am

@Mandy Provan: You're very kind. He was indeed being a BOY with capital letters. I am happy you're inspired by this, I find AM3 to be such a great forum to inspire us all.

Sarito from Basingstoke, United Kingdom

Beautiful shot Bill. He looks very concentrated to finish his work :).

I would love to see everything in focus your boy, yellow bucket and the red Wheelbarrow, just my opinion.

11 May 2009 7:59am

@Sarito: Sarito - you are so right on the focus. Me too. I am still learning: and I find the 85mm portrait lens a real challenge at times: it is so easy to dial down the f/stop (to below f/2.0) and usually you don't get what you really want: but when you do it's magical. Not this time, though... Thanks for the honest feedback.

xavier cardell from menorca-barcelona, Spain

Hi bill, the colors are excellent, and so the compostion and the shutter, but... where is the focus? Is it a "radio flyer" commercial or a photo of a lovely kid playing with water? :-)

11 May 2009 8:14am

@xavier cardell: You are absolutely right about missing the focal point on this picture. I was focusing on the foreground element I wanted in sharp focus, and hoped it carried through to my son. Probably needed f/5.6 or f/8 to really achieve that. Live and learn, and keep practicing! Thanks for the honest feedback. Bill

Ravi from Bangalore, India

Loved the innocence!

11 May 2009 8:57am

@Ravi: Thanks Ravi!

Mandy Provan from Johannesburg, South Africa

Hey Bill I noticed you commented to Sarito on the 85mm fixed focal lens........I find I get blurred images quite a bit.....I am using a shutter speed that is just about the same speed as the lens length so I shouldn't really be getting camera shake. do you find this too? I have now made sure that I don't let the shutter dip below 1/100 and it has seemed to help somewhat but there are still those blurred shots!!! Would love to hear your thoughts :)

12 May 2009 6:34am

@Mandy Provan: Yes, that's a great rule of thumb. I use it often. I can do a little better than 1/focal when I really concentrate and use techniques I learned when I trained as a sharpshooter. That's a great tip -thanks for sharing. for the 85mm particularly, it allows me to go to as wide open as f/1.2: and that can cause dramatically short DOF. Thanks for the very detailed post, and really appreciate you giving me that tip.

Magda from Vancouver, Canada

Adorable! Wonderful capture

13 May 2009 6:12am

@Magda: thank you - we like gordo, think we'll keep him!

Canon EOS 5D Mark II
1/1250 second
F/1.8
ISO 400
85 mm

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