Cien Sonetos de Amor XI

Posted by Bill Jennings ((Bay Area Northern Calif), United States) on 19 April 2009 in Animal & Insect and Portfolio.

Tengo hambre de tu boca, de tu voz, de tu pelo
y por las calles voy sin nutrirme, callado,
no me sostiene el pan, el alba me desquicia,
busco el sonido liquido de tus pies en el dia.

Estoy hambriento de tu risa resbalada,
de tus manos color de furioso granero,
tengo hambre de la palida piedra de tus unas,
quiero comer tu piel como una intacta almendra.

Quiero comer el rayo quemado en tu hermosura,
la nariz soberana del arrogante rostro,
quiero comer la sombra fugaz de tus pestanas

y hambriento vengo y voy olfateando el crepusculo
buscandote, buscando tu corazon caliente
como un puma en la soledad de Quitratue.

--- or an English translation :

I crave your mouth, your voice, your hair.
Silent and starving, I prowl through the streets.
Bread does not nourish me, dawn disrupts me, all day
I hunt for the liquid measure of your steps.

I hunger for your sleek laugh,
your hands the color of a savage harvest,
hunger for the pale stones of your fingernails,
I want to eat your skin like a whole almond.

I want to eat the sunbeam flaring in your lovely body,
the sovereign nose of your arrogant face,
I want to eat the fleeting shade of your lashes,

and I pace around hungry, sniffing the twilight,
hunting for you, for your hot heart,
like a puma in the barrens of Quitratue.

Pablo Neruda
1971 Nobel Laureate of Literature

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I wish I hadn't pushed the ISO so much in this photo - but who knew this cat would sit still so well? I am now better at dynamically changing the ISO by feel (takes practice) : but had just gotten a new camera body a week before this trip... Haven't yet learned the best way for noise reduction post processing. Any pointers appreciated on this.

The tan grass stems near the face bothers me a little bit, but it's a natural shot, and at least it's a triangular frame on either side of this beautiful animal. But the photo matches the poem, and I really like the poem: as it taught me the word crepuscular : so appropriate for a photographer to know.

This was another feline that I was fortunate to shoot from the well treated animals at Triple-D Game Farm in Kalispell, Montana. I showed a photo of another feline earlier this week from a weekend shoot at Triple-D in the image Pause.

Please tell me your thoughts on the image, I really like comments that help me improve my technique and digital processing.

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Of the photographers that follow my blog, my favorite post yesterday was Linda's series of a snail with three images. Very nicely done.

Just made it home after a month of travel - posted a few photos from my journey to within 48 miles of the antartica circle: at nearly the longest day of the year: hence, there was 21 hours a day of sunlight...

Thank you for your patience while I was out of touch.

I do hope you followed Bob Kelly's blog (my roommate) while he is still traveling - he is now on Easter Island - and will be updating his blog for some time to come - please check it out!

Ajay from Pune, India

But I love the grainy effect on the shot which, I think, has come because of the high ISO speed. It has appeared quite well. The shot, in itself, is just mind blowing.

19 Apr 2009 6:04am

@Ajay: Thanks Ajay for your kind words. It is inspiring to get a chance to be so close to beautiful animals in a realistic setting (with handlers looking out for your safety at all times). Triple D Game Ranch is a great place for a "wild animal" look.

zOOm from Paris, France

Wow ! Nice animal, terrific attitude !

19 Apr 2009 6:19am

@zOOm: Yes, it's a great cat. I loved being able to get so close to it, and capture this glint in his, what I found to be, amazingly deep eyes. Thanks for your comments and dropping by - I really appreciate you adding me to your bloglist, and following up with a comment.

jamesy from christchurch, New Zealand

what a beautiful shot I love the intensity you have captured in his eyes

19 Apr 2009 6:28am

@jamesy: Thank you Jamesy. If you have a minute more - check out Pause from triple-d shoot as well. Appreciate you dropping in, and adding a comment.

Craig from Vacaville, California, United States

The grass near his face doesn't bother me a bit! Incredible shot!

19 Apr 2009 6:31am

@Craig: Thanks Craig on your comment. Sometimes I get overly sensitive about my photos. A balanced perspective is always welcome.

Yvon from Orleans, France

wonderful portait
terrific shot

19 Apr 2009 6:52am

@Yvon: Thanks Yvon. Inspiring comment from someone who is great with portraits like yourself.

paolo from Castelnuovo, Italy

i'd say that its an animal that deserve respect ;-) very impressive photo.

19 Apr 2009 7:04am

@paolo: He has both of our respect. Even if he's at a game farm - I was within the pen, and it's still a wild beast. Thanks for your kind words, and dropping them into the blog. Come back soon.

Zing from Hamilton, New Zealand

Wow, great capture, nice focus on the eyes.

19 Apr 2009 7:19am

@Zing: Thanks for checking this out and for the nice comment. If you have time, check out the other wild cat in black and white I saw at Triple D Game Ranch as well.

Sarah from Suisse, Switzerland

Incredible gem-like colour in the eyes - well captured! Such a beautiful animal.

19 Apr 2009 7:39am

@Sarah: Yes, the eyes, for me, was the subject at hand. I find them very unusally reflective and deep. Thank you Sarah for you visiting and dropping a kind note.

Dulcie Andres from Danville, CA, United States

Wonderful photo and, yes, the eyes have it! I was pulled deep inside and that's what I dream of experiencing in an image. You did it!

The Neruda poem is another matter. Magnificent as well, and so much to think on........ more later!

19 Apr 2009 8:06am

@Dulcie Andres: Dulcie - thanks for dropping by the blog and posting such a provocative end of a long saturday night for me - off to bed soon. This is a nice post to finish the night with. I'll drop by your other blog on thursday to see the poetry.

Linerberry from Sumner, Christchurch, New Zealand

What a beauty!!! Magnificent capture!!

19 Apr 2009 8:21am

@Linerberry: Thanks for the kind words - she is a beauty, I enjoyed safely getting this close to her.

Barbara from Florida, United States

Beware is the expression I see here. Those eyes could put you in a trance. Incredible capture, Bill. The ISO isn't as distracting as you think. Often it can be enhanced after uploading to AM3. This is a fine shot.

19 Apr 2009 8:54am

@Barbara: I will look into enhancing the shot - any suggestions on removing the grain in the shadows of the grass especially?

Linda from Riga/Sigulda, Latvia

a great portrait, the grass stems make a nice framing, without them the animal would seem like cut+pasted on the green background. beautiful eyes, the green helps blue to look more blue

19 Apr 2009 8:58am

@Linda: Linda, now you point this out about the framing and the colors - I think you are right, and i won't worry nearly as much - thanks for the critique and kind words.

MEC from Setúbal, Portugal

Magnifique animal! Beautiful work. Congratulations

19 Apr 2009 9:57am

@MEC: Thank you. Please drop by again soon - I am enjoying this, and will post pics daily for some time to come.

Veronelle from Lens, France

dangerous capture, and very, very beautifull

19 Apr 2009 10:42am

@Veronelle: she could capture any one of us, at her will. The quiet power in that gaze was very striking to me. Thank you for your kind words today.

bluechameleon from Vancouver, Canada

There is a slight blue hue and with this grain I feel this shot works so perfectly. A stellar portrait of such an unpredictable animal such as this. Honetstly, this is rather menacing in a quiet kind of way and to me this is what makes is special.

19 Apr 2009 1:06pm

@bluechameleon: I did PS in a light blue cooling filter to emphasize the greens and the blues in the shot. You have an amazing eye to pick that up, well done. You can only imagine how menacing she is, especially if she is so close to you within a pen, and not on any "leash". Thank you for answering specifically what I looked for in a response - that really helps me improve.

Marie :-) from perth, Australia

Wow, such sharp detail, love the curly whiskers and the teeth look pretty sharp too. Great shot. Brilliant close up.

19 Apr 2009 1:27pm

@Marie :-): She could turn me "upsadaisy" very easily - with those teeth. It's a little grainy for me - I wish I could have captured this at ISO 400 or less - but who knew she would sit still for a short bit? Thank you for your comments on the shot.

ordinaryimages from Kentucky Bluegrass, United States

I'm one of them crepusculars, but this guy could be a blood. Great eyes. best...jerry

19 Apr 2009 3:07pm

@ordinaryimages: i just love that word. I didn't think I'd learn if from reading Spanish poems. Jerry, thanks for dropping by again.

Mariana from waterloo, Canada

Oh my God, such a closeness with not so friendly looking guy !!! AWESOME shot !!! Are you ok , any enjuries while taking this shot ? ha ha

19 Apr 2009 3:16pm

@Mariana: I was fortunate to have a large lens on a camera body that stretched that further to nearly 500mm. But she did feel like she was right next to me, when we did "running and leaping shots" towards the camera. No injuries or blood. Thanks for the kind words on the photo.

jim from sebastopol, United States

this is a great photo!! I really like the grass stems. they frame the cat are very convincing in helping to place it in the wild rather than captivity.

19 Apr 2009 4:03pm

@jim: Thanks for the kind words, and for responding with specifics on what you thought about the grass.

Sarito from Basingstoke, United Kingdom

Magnificent capture Bill.. What an amazing animal! We took our daughter to the zoo and amusement park for her Birthday. I have few shots of these animals.. but it would be very long before I find some time to process them...

19 Apr 2009 4:58pm

@Sarito: That sounds like a great birthday event for your daughter. I look forward to seeing your photos when they are processed. Animals make great portraits, as you have no frustrations trying to pose them.

Marie-Hélène Ammor from Casablanca/Paris, Morocco

This portrait is superb ...alive ,clear !! it is impressiv to see him so near !

19 Apr 2009 7:16pm

@Marie-Hélène Ammor: Merci Marie-Hélène for your kind words - it was a life time experience at the Triple D Game Farm in Kalispell, Montana.

Susan from Fort Lauderdale, FL, United States

you got a gorgeous shot, and i don't know what you might do about the grainyness in the background, given that ridiculously high ISO......the look you caught on that cat's face is just perfect!!! I just wonder if some of the color of his face wasn't lost in the exposure?

19 Apr 2009 7:18pm

@Susan: Susan, so right about the high ISO. Still learning! The color and face detail may be due to me experimenting with sharpness in post processing. This is great feedback, just what a friend would tell me.

Mandy Provan from Johannesburg, South Africa

wow Bill this is AWESOME!! What a great capture! :)

19 Apr 2009 8:45pm

@Mandy Provan: thank you Mandy for uour kind words and dropping by my pages so consistently.

eva from Rouen, France

Fantastic ! Fabulous !

19 Apr 2009 9:15pm

@eva: Eva,thank you for dropping by this page and saying such kind words.

B. Thomas from Arlington, Texas, United States

I can't pull my eyes away. Beautiful!!

19 Apr 2009 9:20pm

@B. Thomas: Thanks for the kind words. That type of emotional response really helps me guage what works for others. Please come back to my blog again soon.

Magda from Vancouver, Canada

Amazing capture! Great timing!

19 Apr 2009 9:21pm

@Magda: I missed the leaping shots before she came to a rest in the grass - one of the reasons the ISO was so cranked up. I found it easier to photograph a sitting cat, than a leaping one!

Ron from Saint Louis, United States

Terrific photograph, Bill ... I think the noise (primarily visible [to me] in the background) was a fair trade off to ensure that your shutter speed was fast enough to capture a sharp shot on your subject. I use NIK Software's Dfine plug in for Aperture and am very pleased with its overall noise reduction quality and its ability to reduce noise selectively ... ron

19 Apr 2009 10:21pm

@Ron: ron, great pointers for a plugin. I always feel better when someone I respect has used a product and can recommend I try it. I was experimenting on the limits of the sensor -this ISO seems too high for anything except extreme use.

Susan from Fort Lauderdale, FL, United States

check out this site for free download of "noiseware".....
http://www.imagenomic.com/nwpg.aspx

it's not bad, for free!!

19 Apr 2009 10:23pm

@Susan: Susan, I will. Thanks for the link, and for answering my specific questions about noise reduction. Always appreciate your feedback.

observing from North West, United Kingdom

A beautiful (wild) cat that has incredible Blue eyes. There is a very slight grain visible very much like film, I find that this can be appealing in certain shots.

19 Apr 2009 11:51pm

@observing: I am glad the grain doesn't distract from the shot for you. Thank you for visiting and posting such a kind comment.

Simply Col from Winnipeg, Canada

Such an awesome capture... to tell the truth, I don't think I would have even noticed the noise if not pointed out. I use the free version of "Neat Image" on occassion and find it quite helpful.

20 Apr 2009 3:08pm

@Simply Col: Really appreciate the pointers to how to fix the high ISO I had the camera set for (I was trying to capture this cat mid-air leaping, and didn't succeed: but that's why the ISO was so much higher than I would ever generally use). I am glad the eyes are so powerful, you don't notice the grain in the grass in the background.

john4jack from Corvallis, Oregon, United States

Dynamite capture!

22 Apr 2009 10:52pm

@john4jack: She was about to pant. This was just before her tongue was hanging out from heat that day. She is a beautiful animal.

Canon EOS-1D Mark III
1/400 second
F/5.6
ISO 1250
300 mm

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