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Hospital Corner at AlcatrazPosted by Bill Jennings ((Bay Area Northern Calif), United States) on 13 April 2009 in Architecture and Portfolio. Several time a year, the prison museum at Alcatraz enables visitors at night to see the island with the park rangers. As I walked through the ominous hospital of the prison, I captured this using available light (long exposure on tripod). Limited post-processing (cropping and leveling the window). The light through the bars in the dreary room gives one the contrast of hope and healing in a dreary prison Alcatraz. The angles of the light worked for me, and I wanted to capture the mood from the peeling paint. Just made it home after a month of travel - posted a few photos from my journey to within 48 miles of the antartica circle: at nearly the longest day of the year: hence, there was 21 hours a day of sunlight... Thank you for your patience while I was out of touch. I do hope you followed Bob Kelly's blog (my roommate) while he is still traveling - he is now on Easter Island - and will be updating his blog for some time to come - please check it out!
Comments (23)
bluechameleon from Vancouver, CanadaExcellent shot! The light from the window is just fantastic the way it reflects onto the wall and floor. The pattern from the window on the floor is amazing. 13 Apr 2009 5:12am @bluechameleon: Thank you. After looking at your portfolio - I must say, that's strong words from a master of light and form (yourself). I have added you to my blogwatch. San G. from Encino, California, United StatesWhat a range you have here. Your interests, color palettes and scale seem varied, but what is consistent is the level of quality. Each of these images is true to its subject and says its story in the most authentic, congruent way. You have RANGE! 13 Apr 2009 7:54am @San G.: Thank you San. I aspire to keep the quality of my images high: but it takes REAL WORK to do so. Sometimes my job gets in the way of what I really want to do (be outside with my camera). Sarah from Suisse, SwitzerlandWow - that's a very special shot. You've captured the dreariness so well yet, as you said, the light of hope and healing is an over-riding factor. Great job, Bill. 13 Apr 2009 8:13am @Sarah: Thank you Sarah. That means a great deal coming from such a strong photographer as yourself. xavier cardell from menorca-barcelona, SpainFantastic photo. Welcome to the community. 13 Apr 2009 8:56am @xavier cardell: Gracias. I am learning so much from others on AM3. I now think through the day: what will I post tonight? @Veronelle: Avec précision, il vous saisit, doesn' ; t il ? Ajay from Pune, IndiaThe long exposure has worked quite well for you, Bill. I simply love the light coming from the window and spreading out on the floor. The mood the dreary hospital is capture so very well. 13 Apr 2009 1:55pm @Ajay: Thank you Ajay. I really appreciate you being one of the first to follow my blog. I look forward to your comments each day. Mandy from Middle of Nowhere, Canadawonderful image.. the warm light contradicting the feeling of being trapped. what a wonderful old place if must be to explore 13 Apr 2009 2:13pm @Mandy: It's an eerie place being on "the rock" at night: as you are very aware that you are in a prison, that's also on an island surrounded by very cold water, a mile from a save haven. It really sets the mood for dark places. The light gives one much needed hope. Marie LC from FranceUn hôpital qui manque considérablement de confort mais qui restitue bien l'ambiance qu'il devait y avoir dans cette prison 13 Apr 2009 5:31pm @Marie LC: Dans un certain sens, étant reconstitué dans un hôpital de prison prolonge la limite de la prison - est-elle vraiment fortifiante ? Peut-être that' ; s le vrai thème. DaveB from Exeter, United KingdomNice long exposure, although I think this one might have been inproved by cropping / reframing so the doorframe to the right is out of shot? Still, mustve been one atmospheric place to shoot! 13 Apr 2009 7:14pm @DaveB: Dave - thanks for the cropping comment. I wrestled with the door frame in my cropping quite a bit. I tried it both ways; and I slightly like it better with the door frame in the image: only as if I didn't include it - I wound up cropping the light from the window : which is needed for the mood. I really appreciate my first real critique: and I will go back into photoshop tonight, and see if the crop you suggest is stronger for me this time. (OK, Dave - I skipped lunch today, and played with the cropping. I think you're right. Thank you for the great feedback. I won't re-post the image: as I want your comments to stand with the original image.). Sarito from Basingstoke, United KingdomLove the light and shadow play in the image. You have captured the mood very well. very interesting window. 13 Apr 2009 10:40pm @Sarito: Thank you Sarito. Glad you feel the mood like I saw it. mariana from Canadahard to believe it is a corner from the hospital. brilliant light, super atmosphere . very, very interesting photo ! 13 Apr 2009 11:03pm @mariana: Thank you Mariana. It struck a cord with me as well. DaveB above suggested cropping out the door frame on the left foreground - I love such critiques. Do you have any suggestions for me? Susan from Fort Lauderdale, FL, United StatesNice shot you got.....Is this a different area than when you tour the prison itself? I did that a few years ago, and the place is truly eery...... 13 Apr 2009 11:11pm @Susan: Susan, embarrassingly enough, I've never taken the "traditional" tour of Alcatraz: so I don't know what's on the regular tour. We were able to go anywhere in the prison that night: as long as the groups would agree where we wanted to go: we saw the basements under the prison, in the prison, behind the kitchen: lots of places. I would imagine the hospital was pretty accessible to regular tours: they had tour signage in multiple of the rooms. Thank you for your kind words on the shot. mariana from CanadaI am back to take another look . I do not see anything wrong with this piece of the door . I would not change anything about this shot . To me it is just perfect :)) 14 Apr 2009 12:25am @mariana: Thanks for the second look. I owe you the same someday - just ask for it, oK? Barbara from Florida, United StatesI am in awe at many things here, Bill. 14 Apr 2009 2:09am @Barbara: Thank you for your real critique. I hope you're as honest when I post an image that needs real work! I went back to your portfolio earlier today: and I look forward to learning from you. If you wish, I'll be as honest with what I see in your work as you wish me to be. Please be VERY honest with me. Jen from St. George, United StatesBeautifully captured! We all see things differently... I thought the image was bleak and depressing, and then I read your explanation, and looked at it again, and it changed for me. I was able to see it the way you were seeing it, and I really could feel the hope!! Either way, a truly moving image! 14 Apr 2009 4:02pm @Jen: yes, the emotions that this picture draws is very strong. I am glad the comments changed your perspective: but I appreciate you sharing your first thoughts with me as well. Thank you for taking the time to share these. The emotional appeal (or disgust) from a photo is what makes a picture last in our minds. Jen from St. George, United StatesJust in case this doesn't go without saying... I still loved the image when I thought it was depressing. I love photography that evokes strong emotions and forces me to feel something, just from viewing an image. :) 14 Apr 2009 9:39pm @Jen: Such images just hang with you in your memory, don't they. Long afer you forget the composition - it's how light creates the mood that lingers. Thanks for the kind words - I do hope that the feeling of depression was quickly erased (when you looked back at your cheerful flowers). Ron from Saint Louis, United StatesBeautiful light and texture ... the scene, itself, makes me think of all the drama that played out in this space ... if walls could talk! 14 Apr 2009 11:19pm @Ron: So well said. The backstory would have been a great one to understand - I regret not seeing the attack, and how this young zebra got away. Thanks for posting a comment on the blog today. Jacobo from Sevilla, SpainI think you succeded in capturing the depressing and oppressive atmosphere there. I can't imagine what the sick prisoners felt there..... Congratulations. 15 Apr 2009 6:38pm @Jacobo: Gracias Jacobo. The color and the bars drew me to the scene: and the light signaled hope for me. I can't imagine being incarcirated on the Rock! Thank you for your feedback on this photo. The Dark Dude from Maestoso, United Kingdomhey dude 16 Apr 2009 10:31pm @The Dark Dude: Thanks Dude. You can tell the play on moods, light, and shadow. Even the shadows from the bars have meaning. Alcatraz is a great place - if you ever get a chance to visit, you should. Thanks for the kind words on one of my favorite images. Francesca from FranceThe lighting and texture here is unbelievable. Really nice shot. 10 May 2009 11:16am @Francesca: Thank you Francesca. I enjoyed shooting with available light at night for this one. Roman from Thunder Bay, Canada... Alcatraz, so much history behind this place, isn't it? This is, arguably, my most favourable image of yours. Probably because my imagination just gets loose when I think about Alcatraz..... cheers 23 May 2009 12:50am @Roman: Roman, you please me by walking through my older images on AM3. You're the absolute best! Made my memorial day weekend, really. it was a special treat to walk the halls without all the tourists. Keeble and Schuchat has annual photo shoots there at night: and I gladly signed up. Drop by sometime when you're in San Fran, and we can go there together and enjoy the mystery! Thanks for the kind words about it being a special image in my portfolio. paul from Tadcaster, United Kingdomyou have a really interesting and varied portfolio. I like the play of light and colours in this shot 28 May 2009 7:46am @paul: thank you paul - part of the reason for the variety, is that I'm still learning what I like - so I'm doing a great deal of experimentation... this is one of my favorite indoor shots taken with natural light. dj.tigersprout from New York City, United Stateswow -- wonderful lighting and soft focus!! i KNEW this was Alcatraz!! 26 Jun 2009 8:10pm @dj.tigersprout: Had to be, didn't it? Where else do you see this type of hospital room? Thanks for walking through some of my earlier posts, and placing such a nice comment on the blog. |
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